Gethsemane
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Deep inside this garden of souls lies the bones of a lifetime drowning in half-truths,
Of long and slowly forgotten days that were sadly beyond repair,
Of nights not unlike the darkest side of the moon
A few insignificant touches of the brush would be all that it took,
to make life go on as she thought that it should;
Unbroken and bright, the simple and small
while echoes of unwanted things filled the silent grey halls . . .
Of her Gothic cathedral, sadly visited by few, where three skeleton keys
were kept hidden from view
because life wasn’t meant to be that easy, and she kept it that way, anyway
maybe all the way
The tall stained-glass windows soaked with rays of the sun
kept the white light of truth from touching the soul of anyone, near or far,
it never really mattered
distance was never a fragile thing
Deep in this garden of souls lies the bones of my life, my blacks and my blues, and yes,
my oh-so-not-insignificant life
But you will know I was here by two things left behind
originally unwanted but in the sweet by and by
they would find . . .
You.
Somewhere
deep in Gethsemane
with two deep sunset roses nearby . . .
November 17th, 2009 at 10:19 am
Hauntingly beautiful man. I absolutely love the imagery you use.
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November 17th, 2009 at 12:03 pm
Beautiful and sad poem, Michael. I haven’t been here in some time, but I haven’t forgotten you.
Today is the one year anniversary and it’s not so bad. There is peace.
Thought you should know that it gets better, after they have left. You do recover.
Kat
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November 17th, 2009 at 3:57 pm
I’ve had to read this numerous times in order to know what to say. Often the case when something touches me deeply, as this has.
I will say I can feel the depths from which this came, and the myriad of emotions that went into it…
Beautiful Michael…just beautiful…..
November 19th, 2009 at 7:52 am
I can only guess; but I’m sure this has much symbolic meaning for you and possibly an explanation meant for others. Then again, maybe not.
For me, it’s cool that you create and share.
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November 19th, 2009 at 12:37 pm
I was captivated from the first line… as I sat here I began to read these words aloud, haunting and beautiful, sad and dark… but that is not you, and it is within these words you planted roses… a perfect harmony… that my dear friend is you
Incredible piece
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November 20th, 2009 at 2:27 am
the image you chose is so beautiful. is it yours?
November 20th, 2009 at 8:27 am
Such a picture you paint with your words, shadows underpinned by hope, the lost by dreams.
.-= dumakey´s last blog ..The land of the living and the land of the past! =-.
November 22nd, 2009 at 10:50 am
I love how you paint with words, Michael. My favorite passage of this poem was the part about the stained glass and the white rays of truth.
Hope you and yours have a wonderful Thanksgiving!
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November 28th, 2009 at 6:20 am
Hey Michael, Thanks for a beautiful poem. Originally I was just going to say that this is a beautiful poem, that’s all I was going to say. As I read the comments I got the idea that this is about something deeper. Something very personal. All I can offer is that love never dies. It stays with us, watches over us, protects us and waits for us to join when it is our turn.
Someone who can share something so beautiful, it would seem to me is someone with a beautiful heart. Thank you.
PS. Don’t be modest about your poetry, someone who can write like this has no need to be modest.
Cheers Op